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Scourge of the Betrayer

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2012
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Many tales are told of the Syldoon Empire and its fearsome soldiers, who are known throughout the world for their treachery and atrocities.

Some say that the Syldoon eat virgins and babies-or perhaps their own mothers.  Arkamondos, a bookish young scribe, suspects that the Syldoon's dire reputation may have grown in the retelling, but he's about to find out for himself.

Hired to chronicle the exploits of a band of rugged Syldoon warriors, Arki finds himself both frightened and fascinated by the men's enigmatic leader, Captain Braylar Killcoin.  A secretive, mercurial figure haunted by the memories of those he's killed with his deadly flail, Braylar has already disposed of at least one impertinent scribe . . . and Arki might be next.  

Archiving the mundane doings of millers and merchants was tedious, but at least it was safe. As Arki heads off on a mysterious mission into parts unknown, in the company of the coarse, bloody-minded Syldoon, he is promised a chance to finally record an historic adventure well worth the telling, but first he must survive the experience!

A gripping military fantasy in the tradition of Glen Cook, Scourge of the Betrayer explores the brutal politics of Empire-and the searing impact of violence and dark magic on a man's soul.

 

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Scourge of the Betrayer 2012-03-26 02:32:19 ChrisW
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ChrisW Reviewed by ChrisW    March 26, 2012
Last updated: April 06, 2012
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Jeff Salyards début novel is a self described slow burn hard boiled fantasy. Slow sounds bad, hard boiled sounds umm hard.... The story is told from the point of view of Arkamondos(Arki for short...thank god). He finds himself hired as a scribe to a bunch of Slydoon warriors who are either a bunch of slave soldiers, murderous mercenaries or soldiers/agents of a foreign empire(depends on who you ask). The Slydoon are led by Captain Braylar a mysterious chap who carries an even more mysterious Flail. Arki finds himself off on an adventure that he and thus the reader know nothing about and remains in the dark for virtually the entire novel as he struggles with traveling with a bunch of soldiers and the violence and death that comes with it.

Salyards doesn't sugar coat the violence and action in this book. The cast arn't a bunch of super soldiers who can take on multiple foes and escape with barely a scratch, death isn't something reserved only for incompetent bad guys and fights to the death aren't flashy, there brutal and savage.

For me, the whole slow burn keep us in the dark approach didn't pay off. I found the reveal and ending to be a tad underwhelming. Some of the dialogue, especially the habit of the Slydoon to qualify their answers to questions, which I'm assuming was meant to be humourous was more annoying to me than funny. On the plus side, Braylar's Flail and the small mentions of the Gods of the world were intriguing and left me wanting to learn more. Braylar himeslf was a bit a of a wanker but the rest of the cast balanced that out.

It won't blow you away but there's enough there to keep you reading.

*This review is based on an eARC received for free from Nightshade Books.

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